This is a great use of photos and text to tell a story. Good practice for your photo essay! You show a clear understanding of the hardships that some children in the world face. In addition, you effectively make the reader question the things in life that we in Canada take for granted. Great work! One way to improve your future blog posts would be to use direct evidence (quotes or paraphrase) from the book in order to better illustrate your point. -LM
This is a great use of photos and text to tell a story. Good practice for your photo essay! You show a clear understanding of the hardships that some children in the world face. In addition, you effectively make the reader question the things in life that we in Canada take for granted. Great work!
ReplyDeleteOne way to improve your future blog posts would be to use direct evidence (quotes or paraphrase) from the book in order to better illustrate your point.
-LM
You did a really good job at constrasting the life of Emanuel Jal and our lives. The pictures were really helpful to support what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could work on would be including quotes and facts to back up your ideas. It makes a much stronger argument.
Yay! :)