This is a good mindmap about Jal's lack of relationships in his life. To make it stronger, please write an introductory paragraph introducing the topic that your mind map is discussing. In this paragraph, you might want to elaborate on some of your ideas. For example, he pushes everyone away from him because he is afraid of losing people. Can you relate to this at all? Do you think that this is a reasonable response after all that he has suffered through? This type of personal response will make your post stronger.
This is a good mindmap about Jal's lack of relationships in his life. To make it stronger, please write an introductory paragraph introducing the topic that your mind map is discussing. In this paragraph, you might want to elaborate on some of your ideas. For example, he pushes everyone away from him because he is afraid of losing people. Can you relate to this at all? Do you think that this is a reasonable response after all that he has suffered through? This type of personal response will make your post stronger.
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